two poems, plucked
from the songs in my head
So long ago I can’t remember who said what, I heard a panel of poets on the radio. They were asked about the role of form — meter and rhyme, shape, numbered stanzas, counting syllables, etc. — and one of them said a form makes a container for what we can’t otherwise hold.
So… this year calls for forms, I think.
On my way to a pantoum, I tripped over an ekphrastic and ended up writing a cento (a poem made of lines from other poems, a poem that requires only that you work with shape and form) instead, which made me want to revisit the last one, which I think a lot of you haven’t seen.
That is how this week’s offering came to be. From the catalogues of Hozier and The National: two poems, constellations of words from mind-galaxies brighter than my own.
until next time, be well. be good to each other. sending love from here, always… 💚.
HZR - a cento the words hung above but never would form, i would not ask and neither would you. but i’m singing like a bird ‘bout it now: it was you all the way down. lord she found me just in time in the lamp light i was free trees deny themselves nothing that makes them grow the best of the world in the palm of our hands, i can recall something that’s gone from me. it’s the only heaven i’ll be sent to - each time i’m shocked by the light. lord she found me just in time in the lamp light i was free trees deny themselves nothing that makes them grow //
NTL - a cento you were never much of a New Yorker, it wasn’t in your eyes. what was it you always said? i’ll still feel the pull, there will come a time i’ll want to know i was here. you were careful, but nothing is harmless in the sunlight in the middle of the street. what was it you always said? we’re connected. if we’re ever far apart, you’ll still feel the pull. the day i die, where will we be? standing in the sunlight, in the middle of the street? drop down out of the clouds, for a glass of gin. what was it you always said? i missed you twenty nine years before i saw you? drop down, i'm still waiting for you every night with ticker tape. i am easy to find. //
Songs performed by Hozier: Shrike; Like Real People Do; I, Carrion (Icarian); Jackie and Wilson; Work Song; Blood Upon The Snow; Damage Gets Done; Movement; Take Me To Church; Wildflower and Barley
Songs performed by The National: I Am Easy To Find; The Pull of You; Weird Goodbyes; You Were A Kindness; Day I Die; Alien; Slow Show

"a form makes a container for what we can't otherwise hold." Amen!
Love the description of forms tripping over each other! and what came then...The Cento!
(also I love the National).